Michael Lewis Schneir
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Section Editors: Wendy Kingdom, Amy Whereat
Results section of a journal article
Author: Michael Lewis Schneir
Medical Writing. 2024;33(3):112. https://doi.org/10.56012/rpfd6138
Section Editors: Wendy Kingdom, Amy Whereat
Methods of a journal article
Author: Michael Lewis Schneir
Medical Writing. 2024;33(2):98. https://doi.org/10.56012/tbyq9909
Section Editors: Wendy Kingdom, Amy Whereat
Syntactic alternatives and distractions: Title to a journal article Author: Michael Lewis Schneir, PhD
Medical Writing. 2024;33(1):110. https://doi.org/10.56012/xjow9091
Section Editors: Wendy Kingdom, Amy Whereat
Syntactic punctuation distraction Slash: usage and misusage Author: Michael Lewis Schneir
Medical Writing. 2023;32(4):86. https://doi.org/10.56012/qlrn907
Author: Michael Lewis Schneir Section Editors: Wendy Kingdom, Amy Whereat
Syntactic punctuation distraction Comma: Over-usage Part 2
Coordinated noncore sentence constituents are likely to be disrupted by unnecessary comma punctuation.
Medical…
Syntactic punctuation distraction Comma over-usage probably results from a tendency to pause and emphasise. How ever, such intuitive punctuation is counterproductive to the coordination of sentence core constituents, the intent of which is to cohere…
Syntactic punctuation distraction
This article explores the problem of omitted commas in the structure of certain sentences.
Contributors: Michael Lewis Schneir (author), Wendy Kingdom (section editor), Any Whereat (section editor)
Medical…
Contributors: Michael Lewis Schneir, Wendy Kingdom (section editor), Any Whereat (section editor) Syntactic punctuation distraction - Michael Lewis Schneir
Medical Writing. 2022;31(4)84-85. https://doi.org/10.56012/tbjp1682
Contributors: Michael Lewis Schneir (author), Wendy Kingdom (section editor), Amy Wheareat (section editor)
Syntactic grammar distraction usage or misusage: Definite article Michael Lewis Schneir Medical Writing. 2022;31(3)94-95.…
The indefinite article a functions as a determiner before a singular count noun, either tangible (a human) or abstract (a trait). This determiner indicates that the noun is either being mentioned for the first time or is general (indefinite) in…
The present participle using and the past participle based on, both traditionally adjectivals, ostensibly misfunction without a noun to modify (a modifee). The frequency of their usage and misusage in research writing justifies a separate article…
Grammatical misagreement in function:
Modifier to modifee
Knowledge of the grammatical function of a modifying syntactic unit facilitates understanding a misfunctional distraction and, in turn, its revision option.
The distinction between the active and passive voice is that the subject acts by means of the active voice verb, and the subject is acted on by means of the passive voice verb.
Introduction In this regular feature, the misagreement in tense is extended from present and present perfect tense (discussed in the previous edition of MEW) to an analysis of the frequently used present participle (of the participial phrase) and…
Grammatical misagreement in tense
I – Present, present perfect
Introduction
Each of the sections of a journal article contains anticipated conceptual components, which can be expressed by a specific verb tense for the perspective of time and the…
In addition to subject-verb misagreement in grammatical number, a misagreement in number is common between a subject and other sentence constituents, which appears in the experimental and contextual sections of a journal article.
The misagreement in number (singular vs. plural) between subject and verb is caused by subject number ambiguity, either intrinsic (the subject itself) or extrinsic (the effect of subject modification).
Excessive post-noun modification, usually as adjectival prepositional phrases, occurs fre - quently in research writing. Occurring less frequently, and less distracting, is excessive prenoun adjectival modification (i.e., stacked modifi cation). The…
Nominalisation is the transformation of a precise verb into another sentence constituent, usually a noun (nominalisation), sometimes an adjective (adjectivalisation). This syntactic transformation elicits the grammatical necessity to add…
Circumlocution is the usage of a multiword structure instead of a shorter syntactic unit, for example, usage of a clause instead of a phrase. The distraction consequence of circumlocution can be sentence pattern disruption and unintended…
Introduction
Dissonant nonparallelism occurs in two patterns of comparison: the typical adjective-based pattern (x is similar to y; there is more x than y) and the less common correlative conjunction-based pattern (the more x…the more y). In this…
Adverb placement is complicated by the variety and abundance of syntactic units that are modifiable by an adverb, ranging from words to phrases to sentences. The most likely such modified units are verbs (and verbals), adjectives (and adjectivals),…
Personalism results from a story-line narration rather than a thematic-focused description. This story-line narration is focused on agents as sentence (or clause) subjects and their actions as verbs, rather than themes represented by noun subjects…
Coordination non parallelism is the lack of structural symmetry between coordinated sentence constituents that are intended to be equivalent in importance. A classic example of such non parallelism is “I love fishing, swimming, and to run.” In this…
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We continue Michael Schneir's fascinating series on distractions in medical and scientific writing, this time concentrating on non-pronoun-induced backtracking with adverbs, verbs, and nouns. This sounds a little…
This is the last of this series of three articles on pronouns that cause distraction by making the reader backtrack. In the first part of this article, we examine a technique for eliminating backtracking by making two changes to the construction of…
This is the second of a series of three articles on pronouns that cause distraction by making the reader backtrack. In this article, we examine a technique for eliminating backtracking by making a single change to the construction of the sentence.…
Pronouns are useful referents (i.e. the thing doing the referring) to avoid repetition of words (usually nouns). Although personal pronouns (he, she, and I, in particular) are infrequent in medical writing, the neutral ‘it’ and the demonstrative…